Hello David! I have read your presentation and maybe it is a little short. Why don't you make it longer? Tell us more about yourself, your family, your hobbies and interests...
For the moment, here you have the corrections I have made, change them and write a little bit more ok?
My name is David, I AM 15 years old and I HAVE brown hair. My HOBBY is PLAYING football,AND I AM STUDYING in IES bosc de la coma
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Hello David! I have read your presentation and maybe it is a little short. Why don't you make it longer? Tell us more about yourself, your family, your hobbies and interests...
For the moment, here you have the corrections I have made, change them and write a little bit more ok?
My name is David, I AM 15 years old and I HAVE brown hair. My HOBBY is PLAYING football,AND I AM STUDYING in IES bosc de la coma
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